I've only got a few minor nit-picks, just a few things I notice that catch my eye as being "off" or out of place that sort of detract, but that's just me, as I tend to see lots of tiny details that others may miss entirely, and I'll leave it up to you to let me know if you want me to voice them or not.
But even still... on the whole, it's very, very nicely done.
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Remember, Truth is just an excuse for lack of imagination.
"Don't hate the actors for being good at the lies they tell. Hate the audience for believing it."
--Me
Devious Comments
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If you want something different, do something different. Only a crazy person keeps repeating the same thing and expects different results!
I've only got a few minor nit-picks, just a few things I notice that catch my eye as being "off" or out of place that sort of detract, but that's just me, as I tend to see lots of tiny details that others may miss entirely, and I'll leave it up to you to let me know if you want me to voice them or not.
But even still... on the whole, it's very, very nicely done.
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Remember, Truth is just an excuse for lack of imagination.
"Don't hate the actors for being good at the lies they tell. Hate the audience for believing it."
--Me
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JOIN an ART JAM every month!!!
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S Poe
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I know half of you half as well as I should like, and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.
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